camp writing

Motivation:

Camp Experiences

Learning Objectives:

Level 3

• Show a developing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, form, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use language features appropriately, showing a developing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts, using a range of appropriate structures.

Level 4

• Show an increasing understanding of how to shape texts for different purposes and audiences.
• Select, develop, and communicate ideas on a range of topics.
• Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.
• Organise texts. Using a range of appropriate structures.

Learning goals:

• To hook the reader in with an interesting beginning
• A variety of sentence starters
• A variety of sentence lengths
• Edit and rework

Effective peer checking and feedback

TO MUM good things

The giant swing was the best experience ever! You get to have a choice if you want to go to level 1 2 or 3. I went to level 3 because I wanted to try something new , would you try it? If you want to go on the giant swing you would have to put on a Hannis to keep you safe from falling.If you want to go to level 3 the other people would need to run to the 3rd pole.

Bad things
the worst thing at camp was the beds because every time I moved it aways squeezes. Another bad thing is scavenger hunt because it was so easy. One time I saw two things on the same tree. FROM LAYTON